Peace Until Eternity Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Peace Until Eternity

Rating: 5.0


Oh Peace
Where are you?
Are you that bird flying
Up high looking
For lush forest
For your lovely nest?
Are you in the
Strings of rain
That fell in the curves
Of the mountain rocks
Hiding from the claws
Of humanity?

Oh Peace
Do not hide
We want to know you
Be with you
Dwell with you
Until Eternity.


Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 08 July 2021

1) Indeed, Peace WHERE are YOU? ! I cite you here your last stanza: : Oh Peace Do not hide We want to know you Be with you Dwell with you Until Eternity. Most touching poem and so sweetest rendered. Very impressive words, marvelously worded.5 Stars full on Top! To my Favourites

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Rebecca Navarre 25 July 2021

Oh, Wow! .. Beautifully painted! .. Beautiful feel! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++and, May you always find peace! ...

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 11 July 2021

Once peace arrives, you never want it to leave. This is an inspiring poem full of hopeful positivity and happy possibility.

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Chinedu Dike 09 July 2021

Elegantly brought forth with artistic excellence. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched, Rose.

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M Asim Nehal 09 July 2021

Poetic innocence. I liked the way you questioned everything, Thoughtful poem.5*****

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Nabakishore Dash 01 September 2021

Nice honest desire.I welcome your great mind.

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Nabakishore Dash 27 August 2021

Very heart touching, .Wonderful expression

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Nabakishore Dash 27 August 2021

Your comments are very encouraging and blissful really.I thank u from the bottom of my heart.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 August 2021

This poem still fascinates me, truly a profound poem. Yes! Peace until Eternity! Powerfully worded.I like it very very much!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 August 2021

Rereading this most touching poem so amazingly worded, and the undertones left are still very touching to me. Thank you so much for this mesmerizing poem. It does me good having reread thia.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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