Thursday, September 22, 2011

'Peace' Said The Dove Comments

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'Peace' said the dove, 'please heed my call
And follow wherever I fly,
Then the land shall be filled with the song of love
And no more shall have to die.'
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Joe Breunig 03 July 2012

An enjoyable piece; loved the concept and message of your poem; perhaps one day, the blight of war will be eradicated; nicely done. -Joe Breunig Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory

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Allemagne Roßmann 02 October 2011

The fight of so many human minds in the aerial roots of representation in characters who are aviators-here are your four birds two for peace ad two with war to tear the world apart with darkness glory and lights fury..well said and exquisitely expressed..

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