Thursday, July 16, 2015

Peace Of Paradise Comments

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A gift bestowed to all of us,
Alighted visions, a wavy sway.
Behold creation, so wondrous,
Swim sweetly in the Milky Way.
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Jeffrey Johnson
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Chinedu Dike 20 July 2015

Piece of great elegance, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely philosophical poem with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Captain Herbert Poetry 17 July 2015

Quench your thirst for true harmony. Great poem

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Jeffrey Johnson 17 July 2015

Many thanks, it's my most prized poem to share to the entire world. :)

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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 17 July 2015

its a beautiful one Jeffrey, you have prescribed ways of avoiding anxiety, i love the scene where we like butterflies fly to the skies. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem 'Isthmus of Joy And Pain'

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Jeffrey Johnson 17 July 2015

Thank you very much for your wonderful comment! :) That stanza is my favourite of all, designed to uplift all who read it. Alright, I will check out your poem and tell you my thoughts.

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