Saturday, May 17, 2008

** Peace Not War ** Comments

Rating: 4.0

Make love not war
Sleep enough wakes up afresh
Reaching for Heaven’s door
Set aside your stress
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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a rich piece Sulaiman! it is a source of many values which are missed nowadays... sure I choose PeaCe...

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Yelena M. 03 July 2009

Mahatma Gandhi would love it...If only this world would give peace a chance..Thanks for sharing and best wishes to you. A.

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Pandian Angelina 17 June 2009

Unique use of metaphors, simple rhetoric form used well, each stanza end stands out well pronounced. Take time to read my 'God is God' and 'War'

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Effie Yalena Steyn 13 June 2009

I love the line 'we're breathing the same air'. It hits hard a beautiful message. Well done, you write a wonderful poem. Effie.

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Subroto Chatterjee 13 June 2009

And the ones to whom this is actually addressed to should.....listen, and act accordingly. Cheers. Subroto

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Surya . 15 May 2009

it is for nothing u r on top of the list.such wisdom and compassion! .wonderfull write, posted 10. surya

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kelleyzie Harris 17 February 2009

i love it its great you have a great gift and thanks for using it but seriously I LOOOOOOOVE THIS POEM it really says alot

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Rivers' Baby Gurl ;) 04 February 2009

wow...... u have many on the top 500! ! ! ! and i can see why! ! ! ! keep writing! ! ! i love ur work

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Andrew Blakemore 29 January 2009

Beneath the skin we are all alike - peace not war- a beautiful thought. Excellent work my friend. Best wishes, Andrew

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Doha Ewiess 25 January 2009

it's a very very very nice poem......I liked it so much.....it's so meaningfull having lots of wonderfull expressions...and its title is also so attractive

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Dolan Doran 21 January 2009

i like it...it's interesting...your word choice is, as always, picture perfect. It's beautiful. I like.

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Carol Rhodes 20 January 2009

We share like values, Mr. Erudite, but only you have the power/wisdom/ability/talent to illustrate so poignantly and correctly, in my opinion, how we should face opposition and differences that clash. What a magnificently powerful message you evoke, one that needs to be repeated over and over again. As most of the comments to this poem indicate, and what seems to be an ongoing trend around the world, more of us are beginning to recognize the importance of reaching out to others. Peace not war, dialogue and not weapons may become a reality ere long. You've blown our minds again! Thank you, Carol

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~ Jon London ~ 20 January 2009

Hiya bro, yet another poetic masterpiece to add to your vast collection of genius writes...you truely are and forever will be...one of the finest modern poets to walk this muddy place we call home..........brilliance as always my brother Keep expressing that finely tuned mind...10++++++++++++++++++++ Best of Health & Happiness to you and yours your brother Jon

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Albert Fernandez 05 January 2009

i like this poem the words paint pictures of true reality i love it the vocabulary is devine!

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Uriah N/A 24 November 2008

I like your diction :) , especially the topic you chose. Songs and poems about war are great to read and listen to. Thank you.

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Marie Diop 02 November 2008

amazing poem. everyone can take it to their hearts and change their lives

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Shiza Khan 25 October 2008

if we all can get this message... we'll understand the purpose of life... marvellous one..thnx for sharing :)

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Bud Kevin 17 August 2008

I like the wide coverage of issues in this poem. Good.

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Victorio Pueblo 14 August 2008

i thought you're singing the Imagine by Beatles. but it's a good poem!

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Icy Rivas 12 August 2008

great poem it beautiful

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