Make love not war
Sleep enough wakes up afresh
Reaching for Heaven’s door
Set aside your stress
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Mahatma Gandhi would love it...If only this world would give peace a chance..Thanks for sharing and best wishes to you. A.
Unique use of metaphors, simple rhetoric form used well, each stanza end stands out well pronounced. Take time to read my 'God is God' and 'War'
I love the line 'we're breathing the same air'. It hits hard a beautiful message. Well done, you write a wonderful poem. Effie.
And the ones to whom this is actually addressed to should.....listen, and act accordingly. Cheers. Subroto
it is for nothing u r on top of the list.such wisdom and compassion! .wonderfull write, posted 10. surya
i love it its great you have a great gift and thanks for using it but seriously I LOOOOOOOVE THIS POEM it really says alot
wow...... u have many on the top 500! ! ! ! and i can see why! ! ! ! keep writing! ! ! i love ur work
Beneath the skin we are all alike - peace not war- a beautiful thought. Excellent work my friend. Best wishes, Andrew
it's a very very very nice poem......I liked it so much.....it's so meaningfull having lots of wonderfull expressions...and its title is also so attractive
i like it...it's interesting...your word choice is, as always, picture perfect. It's beautiful. I like.
We share like values, Mr. Erudite, but only you have the power/wisdom/ability/talent to illustrate so poignantly and correctly, in my opinion, how we should face opposition and differences that clash. What a magnificently powerful message you evoke, one that needs to be repeated over and over again. As most of the comments to this poem indicate, and what seems to be an ongoing trend around the world, more of us are beginning to recognize the importance of reaching out to others. Peace not war, dialogue and not weapons may become a reality ere long. You've blown our minds again! Thank you, Carol
Hiya bro, yet another poetic masterpiece to add to your vast collection of genius writes...you truely are and forever will be...one of the finest modern poets to walk this muddy place we call home..........brilliance as always my brother Keep expressing that finely tuned mind...10++++++++++++++++++++ Best of Health & Happiness to you and yours your brother Jon
i like this poem the words paint pictures of true reality i love it the vocabulary is devine!
I like your diction :) , especially the topic you chose. Songs and poems about war are great to read and listen to. Thank you.
amazing poem. everyone can take it to their hearts and change their lives
if we all can get this message... we'll understand the purpose of life... marvellous one..thnx for sharing :)
i thought you're singing the Imagine by Beatles. but it's a good poem!
a rich piece Sulaiman! it is a source of many values which are missed nowadays... sure I choose PeaCe...