Thursday, February 23, 2012

Peace Is Overrated Comments

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A land of peace is overrated.
The dream of it is seriously out-dated,
Because peace is truly non-existent
The dream of it is only ever lent
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Lenore Lee
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Karen Deeks 07 March 2012

It is hard when one finally realises that just sitting back, whilst someone slaps you around the chops or takes what is yours, that if you just sit back and accept (you gain nothing) no self respect. If people ramble on about peace (and don't get me wrong) I prefer peace any day but if someone invades your country or home, do we just invite them in and offer a cup a cha? Nah... So I make you totally spot on! ! This is a great piece which evokes emotions (certainly got me at it!) lol thanks for sharing Karen

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Valerie Dohren 06 March 2012

A very good poem, with which I would concur, although a world of peace would be nice.

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Wahab Abdul 29 February 2012

a fantastic work, well said and well pictured poem, i like it.

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