Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, August 28, 2013

Peace Is Only Mean Comments

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It is hunger for more territories
That adds to woe and miseries
Population adds and creates problems
National sentiments add to the troubles
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2013

Good poem for 9/11 Diana Hoy10 hours ago Needs a little polish though, a couple of lines are confusing due to gramerical error. All in all a very good poem, and fitting for the upcomming 9/11 anniversary.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2013

Post peace is being evasive. PARTHA SARATHI PAUL6 minutes ago befitting in context of contemporary tension steeped world. illuminating- - - - Comment +1 I don't know

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2013

Thewordking Hljohnson2 minutes ago There is something about this that leads me to think about who you are. kind of like how a dictator would speak, I just don't know it has it's good points it just that are you being real about it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2013

Very political like Correl said. Jasper Dammy7 minutes ago I like it. Nice effort in directing such focused lyrics towards such a tricky subject. Comment +1 deep

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2013

Kristy Correll8 minutes ago Political. Praying for peace Comment +1 hmm

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2013

Taylor houston7 minutes ago very... informative

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2013

It is hunger for more territories That adds to woe and miseries

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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