Thursday, March 22, 2012

Peace In The Storm Comments

Rating: 4.8

I stand alone beside the stormy sea,
The crash of waves roll over me.
And seagulls screaming their harsh cry,
Sing songs of praise to God on High.
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Jazzie Sweigart
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Kumar Parashar 26 March 2012

When fright'ning storms of life around you beat, And you are tossing on your fleet, I'm here to guide you where you stray, Just give control to Me that day.' hey i never realized it but you have some serious talent, i would suggest to write more often, great poem and great description with amazing imagination

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Dawn Campbell 24 March 2012

I love this one! -) It flows beautifully. My favorites are those that rhyme.; •)

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