Monday, March 17, 2014

Peace In Solitude Comments

Rating: 5.0

A melody caught my ear today,
It deeply touched my soul,
I heard a duet being performed
By a lark and an oriole
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Lora Colon
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Bri Edwards 09 August 2015

to MyPoemList. the birds and rhyming triumphed over the revulsion caused by 'love' poems. heh heh. bri :) I'll find your place of solitude; please don't think I am rude. I'll sing you a tune I learned in bog. I am 'your' lonely lovesick frog. bri :)

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Savita Tyagi 09 May 2014

Beautiful. Connects to my heart. Sitting in my back yard I too have learned to recognize the duets sang by those birds hidden in trees. Thank you for sharing.

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Georgios Venetopoulos 05 April 2014

It is a very well written poem. Thank you for it. :) G.

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Chuy Amante 20 March 2014

OMG! I LOOOOOOOVE This! ! ! ! ! ! I'm racing to your list to feel more! ! ! thanks

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Khairul Ahsan 18 March 2014

The last three stanzas are sad and touchy! All your poems are like beautiful songs. Sadness is sweet in solitude.10/10.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 18 March 2014

time so often turns fulfillment in love into solitude of peace, but signs of love are never gone.

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