Tuesday, August 21, 2007

Peace In His Arms Comments

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Dream of the day we will be together
Imagine the aura about us
Focus on how I will feel
Eyes closed to reality
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Alison Smith
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Marci Made 21 August 2007

Tremendous insight in this wonder and now perhaps I can fall back asleep. only have four hours in so far tonight so eight more to go for me....this is so comforting to me for some reason.~~~~~~~~marci. :) ~~~~~~~*******

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David Harris 21 August 2007

Alison, another wonderful poem. Dreams are a wonderful thing, everything that you ever wanted can come to you in a dream. You can shelter in the arms of of someone who seems out of reach and dispel all the hurt of the past. Beautifully worded my friend. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Ivan Donn Carswell 21 August 2007

When you contain ghosts the best thing is as you've done, write them out... Rgds, Ivan

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Jason Judeschild 21 August 2007

that peace you speak of....how grand it is especially when the experience is missed

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Alison Smith

Alison Smith

Orange, New South Wales, Australia
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