Peace Comes Back Comments

Hanaart you have a raw talent... thanks for your invite I enjoyed your work... let me know the next poem you write look foreward to it ... Regards Alf... have a look at mine when you have time

loved it..write on..

very well written poem 10

Ask your old past and waves of the sea. Ask your lovely nights, darkness and tears. Ask all your pains, ask all your fears. Will love come back? ............................................. yet tears glean by the fear eyes still records depth of darkness of those nights as reasoned to ill time soul seems to cry by innocence.....wonderful write by imagery, yet evocatively ingenious by painful sorrow,10+++, thanks for sharing

Swimming in the sea of sadness caused by the water of separating. Very powerful!

a great poem indeed..sweet idea..good expression, well written and meaningful thought..its really a good poem and i agree with your idea, , well done 10/10