Monday, November 18, 2013

Peace Be Upon You All-2 Comments

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Once I pet a parrot and taught him
“Peace be upon you all”
Many passerby must have heard
The beautiful words, from the bird
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Valsa George 18 November 2013

The living monument you erected for your bird finally turned into a great haven for many birds! The whisper you heard 'Peace be upon you all' may be an illusory experience, but a joyous projection of what you once taught your parrot! Loved this great write. A 10

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Wahab Abdul 18 November 2013

this really a good theme...it could be your best poem.... i like it

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