Tuesday, September 1, 2015

Peace And Joy Out Of Reach! Comments

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A wall of black clouds block the Moon to view the world!
The Moon rising above the wall, changes size from gold to silver;
From above all hurdles Moon can see all things as they really are!
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M Asim Nehal 01 September 2015

Superb lines: : : Fate is pursuing them through thick and thin by their behaviour and tongue

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Ramesh T A 02 September 2015

You have rightly captured the vital message of the poem! Thanks of for nice comment, my friend!

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