Sunday, June 7, 2009

Peace Ahoy. Wars Destroy Comments

Rating: 4.7

When life is like heaven,
And the doves fly,
To the hatred resulting in wars,
Is it tedious to bid goodbye?
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Ishita Mehta
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Brian Skyers 02 June 2012

wonderfulpoen. my style. the last section says is what we hpoe for. well done.

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Obinna Eruchie 16 July 2009

Peace brings Heaven, War brings Hell. This is a poem that calls for peace. A lovely poem.

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Wow wt a swt lovely poem, u've got such an amazing gift...well dne and keep it up!

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C. P. Sharma 16 July 2009

Your poetry shines in innocence and ease. It is a poem with great widom at this age and deserves its place in Poetry for World Peace. CP

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~ Jon London ~ 16 July 2009

The goverments might just learn something from this piece...........lovely message that flows well down the page.....you have a great gift my friend....well penned 10

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Allemagne Roßmann 08 July 2009

Should serve as the mouthpiece of indian politicians who have by now ruined the country and the process is still on in the name of financial frauds......10 voted...

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Afzal Shauq 07 June 2009

a lovely and very sweeeet poem..I really appreciate your peace willing thoughts and proving that you are kind hearted and you also dream for peace to make it true all around the world..respect your words and the intention about peace.. its very sweet poem... well done...1+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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