Tuesday, October 14, 2008

Peace Comments

Rating: 3.2

I see u walking in the clouds watching the children play,
You cry for the their sorrows, sorrows on their way,
Your thoughts so beautiful, wanting to protect them all,
But that is not how it is going to be resolved.
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Reshma Ramesh
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rohit sapra 28 October 2008

This poem is written with the usage of beautiful words and describes the poetic strength of a creative soul.

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Randy Hogan 22 October 2008

I could never say with words what that means to me. If i tried i would only have a tears in my eyes and frog in my throat. I give 10 to infinity! like ∞ the love you send goes around the world only to find it way back to you My dear friend Peace! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Kholekile Monakali 17 October 2008

ja you are right my friend peace is from God without him you will never be able to forgive someone........nice poem

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Sadiqullah Khan 15 October 2008

Quite mature composition, well measured with fine stanzaic pattern, ,10

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Emancipation Planz 14 October 2008

Sieze the moments... both of you... keep righting them one peace at a time.... shalom...

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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