Friday, February 22, 2019

Peace Comments

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PEACE
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PEACE is a disturbing word: a small death,
Yes;I died years ago with this very word,
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Prabir Gayen
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Biswajit Roy 09 June 2020

My dream was too high to touch the blue Sky, My walk was too slow to reach the target, My approach was too sloth to speak the heart, A shallow time with strong air of hate killed me

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Mihaela Pirjol 25 February 2019

Thank you again for the invitation to read this poem: the title it seems a paradox, contrasting with the content of the poem: there is a fusion of emotions, ideas, yet to be seen in clarity. A well-written poem.

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Srijita Mondal 25 February 2019

I have found some similarity among 'Peace', 'With time all is gone', 'Haiku 165(old joy) '.. All are great poems..Love... 💯+++++++++++++++

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Srijita Mondal 25 February 2019

Peace, PG, Picture all are beautiful ❤️😃🌷😄🌷😃❤️

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Michael Walker 24 February 2019

Usually peace makes you happy and content rather than killing you. That surprised me but, as I read on, I could see what a balanced opinion you were giving about peace. Just a suggestion (I had this problem too) you try for fewer words either making shorter lines or fewer stanzas. Today I had to revise and cut down 2 poems. I started out writing long lines etc. like you.

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Brian Taylor 24 February 2019

This is a beautiful poem. I love the rhythm. I love poetry with all just rhythms in it.

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Valentin Busuioc 24 February 2019

Interesting and beautiful poem!

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 February 2019

starting of this poem is interesting- PEACE is a disturbing word: a small death, Yes; I died years ago with this very word, Peace killed me and buried me within Self, I am a dead person having no depth. .......... Peace is a dead word and I am a shadow // know I there is high a living tie no sigh just eye seek to fly with every breath and nigh PEACE and HAPPINESS is a PIE of a heart; and I dye me with self-satiate joy..............

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Meethi Mondal 24 February 2019

Fine poetry........//////////

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Mark Pietrosanto 23 February 2019

Very touching and spiritual. I like your process.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 23 February 2019

Peace and life.Whether peace is death.A deep thought provoking poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 February 2019

If life is beautiful and to be lived, If life is a song of joy to be sung, If life is a dance to be danced joyously I am a lone witness with pain in heart. such depth in your words calling out for peace is enough for me I shall continue to read your DEATH POETRY as an exception O POET PG my great friend of PH

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Prabir Gayen 23 February 2019

Your love is enough for me...O my beloved Coleridge...

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Anjandev Roy 23 February 2019

Interesting poem throughout.you are very much living with great depth and will remain so forever, I believe. Thanks.anjandev roy.

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Kim Barney 22 February 2019

To me, peace is not a disturbing word, but one of the most beautiful words in the world. An interesting poem, however. Thanks for inviting me to read it.

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Kostas Lagos 22 February 2019

Splendid poem! Amazing writing

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Meethi Mondal 22 February 2019

With the death of my self, Inchoate death, Life became a death with harder fore step, A Shadow of Pain with piercing bleeding, Only to wait for the sun to go down.....irony is strong

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Meethi Mondal 22 February 2019

Beautiful poem on the theme of peace... ironical theme

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Lexi Muegge 22 February 2019

“If life is beautiful and to be lived, If life is a song of joy to be sung, If life is a dance to be danced joyously I am a lone witness with pain in heart.” powerful insight. lovely read! thanks for sharing ~

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Naila Rais 22 February 2019

True it is.................. Naila

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 February 2019

my answer has been given in myp oem you have yet to read dear poet PG KINDLY DO it may show you more light in life may be t's only poet me anyway read it will ye this poem I have read three times already ''Speak Not Of Death Or I Won't Read You Again'' at least all poetry which are DARK I LOVE ROMANTICITY ALL KNOW IT U 2 PG

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Prabir Gayen 22 February 2019

I read and commented dear poet...

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