Peace Comments

that one waz really good 2..sry im really bad about writing comments i usually only know if i like it or not and i liked dat 1....the only thing is on the last line of life, hope, and love it kinda throws off the rythm a little bit like on life (on the last line) i would put 'could never come true', on hope (last line) 'you could ever understand', and on love (also last line) 'could only be insane, ' and thats the only thing i can think of for this 1