Monday, October 11, 2010

Peace Comments

Rating: 4.2

THE steadfast coursing of the stars,
The waves that ripple to the shore,
The vigorous trees which year by year
Spread upwards more and more;
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Bessie Rayner Parkes
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Susan Williams 02 June 2016

That is the rhythm and the rhyme that I wish I could attain. Reads so smooth and easy yet carries a beautiful message

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Rajnish Manga 02 June 2016

How beautifully the poet has described peace in nature all around but for man it is a far cry: ]] All natural things both live and move / In natural peace that is their own / Only in our disordered life / Almost is she unknown.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 02 June 2016

The wonders of nature and miracles displayed by it's manifestations have been marvelously narrated in this poem rich in rhyme and rhythm.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 June 2016

Yes! ! Let us always pray for peace. Nice work.

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Nilima Deb 02 June 2016

nice imagery...sounds lovely... And something of her living force Fashions the lips when Christians say To Him Whose strength sustains the world, 'Give us Thy Peace, we pray! ' loved these lines..superb

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Shouvik Narayan Hore 02 June 2016

Look at the last line of every quatrain. It is a new movement in Romantic verse since the Romantics.

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