Peace Comments

I likes the poem on peace and this is an inspiring one.

I Like this poem, Good one

You move here from a narrative style to something with more use of imagery and metaphor. This brings brighter colors to the piece, more like film. nice. yrs, acbellon

you move here from a narrative style to something with more use of imagery and metaphor. This brings brighter colors to the piece, more like film. nice. yrs, acbellon

its short n true gd job for someone like u very unique 10+

this is...amazing. it's so very true and yet so very dreamlike. almost as if you wish you were being honest with the world, but in everyone elses eyes, you are. there is a hope and longing in this that has yet to be matched with some writers.. very nice.

A wondeful poem, a great one! ! ! ! I liked very much your style here.It's a new and different style for me, and I always love to add something new and different to my own knowledge.I loved mainly the two last lines: 'Silences the nightmares of the mind. Peace feeds the dreams of the heart'.The message is brilliant and I believe that the whole world, mainly nowdays, in the world what we live in, needs to hear a message like this one.

Well written & thought profoundly.Adult enough against your age.

Well written. Very deep thinking for a young woman.

Well crafted poem on a universal theme with lots of food for thought in it. It sums up what peace is all about in simple terms.10.

Nicely written Imperfection finders are indeed never peaceful

at the end i love it

Nice lines about peace. Keep writing, Luzia.

Great...simply superb.....

Well written poem, luzia