Sunday, January 10, 2010

Peace Comments

Rating: 4.3

The angel of death
in shock and awe
stands, perplexed
...
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Ata Khan
COMMENTS
Gita Ashok 31 March 2010

Beautiful. Peace - the one thing that is most needed in this world right now. May I suggest you to read another one written along similar lines? It's called 'Smudge of Blood' (I didn't write it) . I read it today and it made me cry.

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Ruchita Sharma 05 February 2010

divine thought...good choice of words... I liked it.

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Samuel Popeil 04 February 2010

sad but very true poem. but i found that in this, if you rise above all adversity, you shall succeed in what you want.

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Emma Kessler 27 January 2010

A very sad but true poem, with glimmers of hope. Beautiful.

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Rehana Nazli 27 January 2010

Very sad fact of observing the innocent lives being destroyed by the unnatural sources of destructive powers. Peace is a beautiful dream to actualise among all the hoplessness of events around the globe. thanks for sharing your thoughts.

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Lindani Mahlangu 25 January 2010

kwl stlye of writing man, dats well set piece of poem, i lyk it, u gat my vote

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Dorcas J Kimosop 25 January 2010

wow nice poem............... i like it! !

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Mohammed Hassan 15 January 2010

that is so beautiful poem Ata, god bless you and bless this world unless the end is here. thanks for sharing 10++++++

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Mahyar Goodarzi 13 January 2010

AND this is the manifestation of emotion, i like particularly the ending points, the hope. well done.

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Mariam Khan 13 January 2010

Great poeam, can feell it, it's like what's happening today in the world. Take care & keep up the good work.

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Emma Adamyan 13 January 2010

another sight`s look. unusual and impressive, but still phylosofical poem

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Theresa Walker 13 January 2010

ata this good i like it and our every day life we should all pusue peace

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Callie Shaw 13 January 2010

its a nice poem! ......

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Blakk Heart 13 January 2010

Interesting! I like your imagery. Though you use few words for each line (like I favor in my own poetry) your efficiency is amazing!

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POOH POOH 12 January 2010

[ HON3STLY... ii LUV3D iiT! ! ] K33P UP D GUD WURK...

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Ronn Michael Salinas 12 January 2010

Ironic. Cool poem, Ata.

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Ivette T 12 January 2010

Great Poem I imagined each word in the poem, a very dramatic sccene. Loved the poem, keep on writting.

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Alicia Carpenter 12 January 2010

I like this poem alot actually. It's well thought out and very good imagery.

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Kimberly Fine 12 January 2010

very nice! i did enjoy!

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Jonothan Queen 12 January 2010

very vivid imagery, i like this poem alot

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