The angel of death
in shock and awe
stands, perplexed
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sad but very true poem. but i found that in this, if you rise above all adversity, you shall succeed in what you want.
Very sad fact of observing the innocent lives being destroyed by the unnatural sources of destructive powers. Peace is a beautiful dream to actualise among all the hoplessness of events around the globe. thanks for sharing your thoughts.
kwl stlye of writing man, dats well set piece of poem, i lyk it, u gat my vote
that is so beautiful poem Ata, god bless you and bless this world unless the end is here. thanks for sharing 10++++++
AND this is the manifestation of emotion, i like particularly the ending points, the hope. well done.
Great poeam, can feell it, it's like what's happening today in the world. Take care & keep up the good work.
another sight`s look. unusual and impressive, but still phylosofical poem
ata this good i like it and our every day life we should all pusue peace
Interesting! I like your imagery. Though you use few words for each line (like I favor in my own poetry) your efficiency is amazing!
Great Poem I imagined each word in the poem, a very dramatic sccene. Loved the poem, keep on writting.
I like this poem alot actually. It's well thought out and very good imagery.
Beautiful. Peace - the one thing that is most needed in this world right now. May I suggest you to read another one written along similar lines? It's called 'Smudge of Blood' (I didn't write it) . I read it today and it made me cry.