Peace Comments

In four simple lines you capture a world of truth and beauty. May your bird of peace open her wings and soar into the bright sky. Exceptional write. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Peace Peace Peace Most scare and rare the only savior … 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

Golden or not, it is still a cage... and a bird is supposed to soar high up in the sky... it has been a long, long waiting for this bird... will it ever be freed... these words are painful to read... because they are true...

not every thing in life can be freed...sometimes it is for the good... there would not be life is there was only peace... we need the bad to live life... something to fight for...

One of the novel poem i ever read.....God bless....10++++++++++++

HOW VERY TRUE! HOPE THE NOBEL PRIZE FOR PEACE, - WILL HELP OUR WORLD WITH THAT 'PEACE' LONG OVERDUE! 10! -Raj

So sad and so true! Yet, we must never stop trying to free her! Anita

Yes, what if life without peace and freedom! Very well written and expressed! thanks! :)

Peace - Is the need of the hour Come friend let us unite To set her free! Angel

Message from Jazlle Hugo: From: jazlle hugo (Shara Mattar, AD United Arab Emirates; Female; 30) To: Naseer Ahmed Nasir Date Time: 6/30/2009 2: 13: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Peace! Peace be with you! Let the blessings of God flow in your life like a springs of living water or rivers that never run dry. God cares for you today, tomorrow and forever. May you and your family be with God always and be blessed. best regards, joan a.k.a. jazlle/bluebear811

May be just a myth like unicorns and dragons! Written with zeal! Regards

hey man that was grate i like how it flowed to gather good job

a short and very beautiful write indeed and I hope that beautiful little bird will be freed soon or it might be not coz its the game of life and when there is no game then the life will end....thanks for sharing many, many 10'ssssss and A+++++++++ rgds asif

Peace is simple, peace is often so much like a bird in a cage for humanity, thanks for this beautiful metaphor here, Naseer.10+++ Best wishes. Amary.

wonderful piece. amazingly long. :)

nice it really very nice poem... it's short but it's too long in meaning... in fact i like it so much... keep writing

Undoubtedly an excellent short piece. 10 with love.

The answer to the worlds problems, locked away. Your poem is truth itself.

A wonderful piece of work, it reminded me of a poem I wrote once under the title New Age Dictionary by defining some words in a poetic expression....have a look, just for its sake I would like to show you and rest on Ipeace.

powerful statement. love the personification.