“paysage D’ame” Comments

I love this poem. The creativity and vision of human beings never fails to amaze me! Simply charming.

although i did not understand what this title means, but i truly love and enjoy reading this. And i just want to dance along your lovely words..Love it

Those invisible mountains Surely are hardest to climb One must be steadfast Dorothy

Yes. The last two lines express my feelings very much.

That time was not wasted. Its energy has been preserved in the poem and will multiply its effect with each reader..... and deserts are interesting spiritual places.

The way you incorporate symbols into this poem exemplifies the language of the 21st century, and you speak it well! The originality of this unique style is delightful.

Greatly imaginative-takes the readers along!

Ben, I know there is something very special about this piece and find myself wandering in the desert with you seeking understanding...but guess what, I love the pure imaginative journey of this poem...CLEVER! Dorothy