The dark thins out, the landscape
stirs slowly with hints of life;
the day begins for the old man living
in the house across the road.
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I can hear the tea on saucer, the sniffle and yawn the morning commotion the day moving on and the pensioner reaction to it all. A nice slice of humanity, brilliant observations.
You have portrayed a realistic picture of an old pensioner, his routine during the day and the mindset he has developed. Read with pleasure. A great piece of poetry. Thanks.
Being a pensioner is the happiest person, because he can get his pension cheque every month regularly... think about the poor souls who do not have such a facility..They are forced to work.. the poem is rhythmic with wonderful morning scenes! ! Thank you Ajay..
Sometimes, somewhere, somehow, Even some pensioner's are struggling due their heirs, Where their heirs do not allow pensioners be happy.
I would ask you to read the famous poem 'Children' by Khalil Gibran. Regards, A.K. Das