Wednesday, July 25, 2018

Paying Fare We Shall Go To Fair Comments

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Fair is going on in our city,
We want to visit getting sure joy,
Oh dear greenish white city bus,
You stop for a while to pick up us,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Milan Panda 03 July 2020

Title of this poem is unique and very interesting. We should go to fare but we must pay fair. Very lovely poem!

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 August 2019

Festival! ! Muse of the land. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Valsa George 28 July 2018

Going for a Fair especially with the family is always a pleasure! You have taken me back to my childhood! In what excited anticipation we would be waiting for such fairs! Buying balloons was the greatest excitement...! Some years later, the giant wheels came to be there in the fair! Getting on to it was another excitement!

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 July 2018

nice celebrating fair- Urban Transport Authority has sent you, There is return car festival going on, For witnessing golden dressing up, For feeling nectar drinking of Lord, Our Lord of Universe has invited us, We shall go to this fair to meet pilgrims. nice writing

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 July 2018

A lovely write that depicts the fun and enjoyment of going to a festival. This piece resonates with me when I was a kid. It brings back the good memories that lingered in our minds of how enjoyable to be in such a fair. Well crafted write.Thank you for sharing.10++++

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Sy Wong 25 July 2018

Everyone gets into the bus with smiling faces thinking about the fair. Festivals!

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Mj Lemon 25 July 2018

A great work, Kumarmani. This poem brings back so many childhood memories. Summer is fair season. I remember looking forward to late August for the last great push of fair activities. It was a pleasant respite before back-to-school. There's also something in your words that jarred memories of a great old movie...State Fair. I haven't thought about that film in years. So much nostalgia...thank you Kumarmani.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 July 2018

We are ready to go to nearby fair, Evening has come green trees feel, Rain has gone away, leaves now sing......brilliant poetic expression! A beautiful poem! Thanks dear sir for sharing...10

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Hazel Durham 25 July 2018

Delightful and charming poem about the local bus going to the fair and looking forward to meeting people there to rejoice in the festivities. I love the beautiful style of this great write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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