Payback Comments

This version is ever so much better, Herbert...not a single snag...and the fellow was a monster. Sometimes payback is sweet, pure and simple! Raynette

Justice and revenge may seem like twin brothers, but, Dearest H., they are not the same animal at all. I hope you achieve justice, but never revenge...The burden that revenge brings is to heavy to bear. Scarlett

Well crafted story, Herbert, and the ending is superb. There is one snag which bothered me, though, take a look at your inbox. Raynette

Justice is fine if you can get it. I'll take it if it rears its pretty head. Then comes payback. If no justice, payback will not end until it is futile. H

Dark but well-constructed narrative. As to the message, Herbert, I'd like you to win justice and redress, not revenge. Easy for me to say, though, I know. G.