Pay A Visit To A Riverbank Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpury

Pay A Visit To A Riverbank

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  In the overgrowth and swamps
Many of the plant kingdom may look like weeds
Floating winged seeds that grew into reeds
Plants like seaweeds
Seeds scattered like beads.
All that wet rough marsh
on my soft dermis too harsh
Gumboots a good idea!
Or when can't go there
may watch it
in the encyclopaedia.
Gumboots prevent bugs sticking to your soft skin
From the shrubs, herbs and rushes so great for gazing
The more covered up the better to prevent harmful bites
From fleas,  ticks and dangerous mites
Covering up is always beneficial upon the outdoors
Whether you explore the forests or hike on the moors
Thus be it seaside or riverside
In protective clothing it's good to hide

Ah Take a break from going to the money bank
visit another place of natures treasures
Visit today a river bank.<img src='/s/images/smile/happy.gif'>
Lots of flora and fauna all about
Some come with a snout, some with a spout
Yeah time to go out and about

Pay A Visit To A Riverbank
Sunday, January 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: nature walks
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cherie Mort 17 January 2017

Very nice poem! I like the rhyme scheme that you used. And such beautiful imagery!

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Clarence Prince 16 January 2017

Really a lovely poem, with advice of how to protect one's self from mites! Thanks for sharing!

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Julie Smith 16 January 2017

This is a great poem with funny plays of words! Loved the whole nature description, awesome poem :)

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Gladys Brown Prince 16 January 2017

Lot of flora and fauna all about... Yeah time to go out and about Nonetheless, beware of the ticks and dangerous mites, then protect yourself. Lovely, both poem and picture.

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Rebecca Navarre 16 January 2017

P/S Love Your Photo Too! ! ! ! ! Beautiful! ! ! ! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 February 2018

A lovely poem about nature. Yes, it is really wonderful to pay a visit to a riverbank. It is a treasure. A great piece and rhyme.

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Laurie Van Der Hart 21 December 2017

Lovely poem! I totally agree - such fun to be had in exploring a river bank. I've seen how it can fascinate kids and take them out of the clutches of cyber space. I wrote a poem about a river experience earlier this year. It's called Solo River Adventurer. And since you live in Tanzania, you might enjoy my Sigi River poem written in Amani,

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Matt Mooney 05 July 2017

The most important bank of all - the bank of the river. You had me wading around with you. Great to meet again in PH!

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Tom Billsborough 04 July 2017

Great illustrations and an inspiring poem, Zaynab. But don't mention seeds to me! Some rascal gave me six different types of seeds a few weeks back. My garden is like a minature jungle so I had to clear a space four yards square to make room for planting. Put my back out for a month! Just recovering! There is much joy exploring River banks, I agree.

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Muhammad Ali 20 January 2017

Beautiful poem. Very nice way you said and it refreshes

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Port Hart corte (place of birth)
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