Thursday, December 7, 2023

Pavement Weeds - Haiku Comments

Rating: 5.0

It rained heavily
Cement pavement of roads cracked
Weeds built their houses
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rebecca Navarre 31 December 2023

Despite most people not liking the weeds. This brings an amazing feeling of spring to me! .. Endless Stars and 10'S! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 31 December 2023

Beautifully presented, of nature and it's growth! ..

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 December 2023

THREE: To my FAVOURITES this Beautiful painting.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 December 2023

TWO: yellow-brown carpet over the broken parts of the street, a very beautiful painting to behold Haiku very beautifully depicted. TOP Marks!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 December 2023

ONE: the streets are damaged by a heavy rain shower, and weeds spring up, green-yellow color on the pavement, shows a very beautiful scene,

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 December 2023

MISSING the Stars, but TOP Marks for you, dear Rose Marie.

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Sandra Feldman 14 December 2023

Simply lovely!

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Sandra Feldman 14 December 2023

So very descriptive and well written.Three lines that so perfectly describe the scene as your poetry does it so softly, with such intense esteem of nature

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 December 2023

The way of nature, expressed through a fantastic haiku. Dearest Rose, you deserve the best. To my favourite too.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 December 2023

Wonderfully thought and worded. Something cracks and breaks and many others rise and emerge.

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Wonderfully realistic. It's all a chain of incidence. The road, the pavement, the crack and finally the weeds.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 08 December 2023

Wonderful Rose-Marie Thanks for sharing

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Anjandev Roy 08 December 2023

Meaningful and excellent....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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