It rained heavily
Cement pavement of roads cracked
Weeds built their houses
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TWO: yellow-brown carpet over the broken parts of the street, a very beautiful painting to behold Haiku very beautifully depicted. TOP Marks!
ONE: the streets are damaged by a heavy rain shower, and weeds spring up, green-yellow color on the pavement, shows a very beautiful scene,
MISSING the Stars, but TOP Marks for you, dear Rose Marie.
So very descriptive and well written.Three lines that so perfectly describe the scene as your poetry does it so softly, with such intense esteem of nature
The way of nature, expressed through a fantastic haiku. Dearest Rose, you deserve the best. To my favourite too.
Wonderfully thought and worded. Something cracks and breaks and many others rise and emerge.
Wonderfully realistic. It's all a chain of incidence. The road, the pavement, the crack and finally the weeds.
Despite most people not liking the weeds. This brings an amazing feeling of spring to me! .. Endless Stars and 10'S! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++