It rained heavily
Cement pavement of roads cracked
Weeds built their houses
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Wonderfully thought and worded. Something cracks and breaks and many others rise and emerge.
The way of nature, expressed through a fantastic haiku. Dearest Rose, you deserve the best. To my favourite too.
So very descriptive and well written.Three lines that so perfectly describe the scene as your poetry does it so softly, with such intense esteem of nature
Despite most people not liking the weeds. This brings an amazing feeling of spring to me! .. Endless Stars and 10'S! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++
TWO: yellow-brown carpet over the broken parts of the street, a very beautiful painting to behold Haiku very beautifully depicted. TOP Marks!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderfully realistic. It's all a chain of incidence. The road, the pavement, the crack and finally the weeds.