Sunday, December 4, 2005

Pavement(Sidewalk) Eyes Comments

Rating: 3.5

In a rumble tumble morning
After an evenings firelight glow
Prayers are left unanswered
From a God who didn't show
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Bill Smith
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Ernestine Northover 14 December 2005

A lovely read, a lovely write, Bill, it flowed along really well, and I love the red shoes image. Very moving. Hard to explain but I loved it. Love Ernestine XXX

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