Pavement Dwellers Comments

A very ugly and pathetic face of our society! The rich live in the midst of all splendour in palatial bungalows while the poor street dwellers vie with each other to occupy a little space in the pavements and street corners to lay down their bodies. Where is equality? Do we ever give enough thought for their plight? When we write or read poems of this sort, our mind melts in sympathy for a while, but soon get transported to our own pursuits of amassing more wealth! This kind of inhuman disparity should be lessened and people should be provided with better facilities to live in dignity like human beings and not like mongrels. The Govt. has to take the initiative! A great write and deserves top marks!

A very thoughtful poem indeed, We have made a great progress in science and technology and yet remain unprogressed and uncivilized

The life of a tramp or peddler well envisioned.. Thanks for sharing

Very sensitive and thought provoking poem drafted well with wonderful social affairs. Struggling to find some space is too difficult at modern time as this is difficult to search peace. Still hope rises new sun with summer and cold winter. An amazing poem shared....10