Paused Prayers Comments

very beautiful poem........... i liked it

This moment everything turns easy for me, An ocean even seems to be less in my eyes I can narrate gospels in few words I can sing all sonnets in lay man'notes, it's obvious to note you don't only compose poetry but also create its atmosphere as well. There is a strange combination of human senses so poetic, so figurative -where Time has colors, and sky has waves, where breath is to be heard, where the silence has its gleams, yes, you have the ability to narrate Gospels in a few words...keep writing! ! !

A wonderful poem with poetic similes! Enjoyd reading.