Pause Comments

this is very well said...i wish I had more to write in way of a comment...sorry I'm at a loss for words now... Always, amberlee

A phenomenal write! Bravo!

And you made us pause from singing our rhymes, clanging our chimes....and think... TO

kelly...i hope we are not late...i am an ecologist and care very deeply about the environment...lovely poem...great flow and theme...love...nalini

Great work = but don't blame me. It's not my asphalt! (smile!)

great use of language and a really well thought through poem - I enjoyed it, Steve

And again the elements play a big part - I particularly like the asphalt meeting the sea!