Pause Comments

Second time I read this beautifully crafted poem on pause.All work no play, makes Jack a dull boy nicely explained. My regards to u.

Dear Bharati Ji, Sincerely follow the sweet advice offeered by my younger borther Naba that pause is the befitting remedy really.

This poem describes brilliantly a pertinent problem of the modern man and pause is the befitting remedy really.

Very thoughtful write! The dilemma of urban life! Beautifully depicted. A poem marked with clarity, depth, vision. Compelling piece!

Slowing down is an art which many few possess. Good Poem.

Now the doctors advice, what poets have been saying all along.

We've all become a part of this rat race, where everyone is racing but no one knows why or where; we're more concerned with the work at hand than with our constraints. A wonderful poetry that makes you think. Full *****

Appreciate that you pause often to share your poetry with us. By following your well laid out tips I'm sure to be healthier and happier! Thank you!

We wonder what has gone wrong. We have to pause and ponder...yes dear poetess, we need to do so. An excellent poem!

I am happy that the stature of your poetry is growing day by day! An excellent poem! Yes, inspite of our busy schedule we must explore a little leisure, to stand and stare and enjoy the beauty of nature!