Pause Poem by Bharati Nayak

Pause

Rating: 5.0


Life has become so full of
Hustle, bustle, worry and anxiety
We run from morning till night
Doing chores and no time to rest
Too much work and no play
Takes a toll on our health.
Many ailments bog us down
We wonder what has gone wrong.
We have to pause and ponder
Why is there a rise of diabetes and blood pressure?
Now, even the doctors advise to go slow
And give your haste a' pause'
Give time to care your health
Do exercise, pranayam and morning walk
And pause every now and then
To listen to the tweeting birds
Pause to inhale the sweet scented flowers
Take rest under shady bowers
Breathe cool fresh air and
Enjoy the beauty that nature offers.
You surely need to give your haste a break
Read good books to fill your mind with inspiring thoughts
Take your paint brush that you
Have left long back
And paint a picture you like,
There is no wrong to start it anew
Always give a pause to your hasty steps
Go slow, enjoy beauty and give your body enough rest.
@ Bharati Nayak 16th April 2023

Monday, April 17, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: body,healing,health,nature,beauty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 17 April 2023

I am happy that the stature of your poetry is growing day by day! An excellent poem! Yes, inspite of our busy schedule we must explore a little leisure, to stand and stare and enjoy the beauty of nature!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 April 2023

We wonder what has gone wrong. We have to pause and ponder...yes dear poetess, we need to do so. An excellent poem!

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Rob Lamberton 17 April 2023

Appreciate that you pause often to share your poetry with us. By following your well laid out tips I'm sure to be healthier and happier! Thank you!

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M. Asim Nehal 18 April 2023

We've all become a part of this rat race, where everyone is racing but no one knows why or where; we're more concerned with the work at hand than with our constraints. A wonderful poetry that makes you think. Full *****

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Pallavi Tripathi 18 April 2023

Now the doctors advice, what poets have been saying all along.

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Nabakishore Dash 21 April 2023

Second time I read this beautifully crafted poem on pause.All work no play, makes Jack a dull boy nicely explained. My regards to u.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 April 2023

Dear Bharati Ji, Sincerely follow the sweet advice offeered by my younger borther Naba that pause is the befitting remedy really.

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Nabakishore Dash 18 April 2023

This poem describes brilliantly a pertinent problem of the modern man and pause is the befitting remedy really.

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Nosheen Irfan 18 April 2023

Very thoughtful write! The dilemma of urban life! Beautifully depicted. A poem marked with clarity, depth, vision. Compelling piece!

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Martinez Salotori 18 April 2023

Slowing down is an art which many few possess. Good Poem.

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