Friday, August 10, 2012

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You walked me to my car
As I pretended not to care
Under a night sky with no stars
I was happy you were there
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Aria Siren
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Alla Simone 30 September 2012

I like this- a mix or clever and playful. Well done. I'm laughing at nothing at all. Your lips greet mine gently And put a smile on my face for all of next week. And I find these lines convey the feeling of being mesmerized: I try not to lose my balance, For being so high. And when you leave, It's almost like it never was.

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