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He is the boy on the haystack with the moon in his eye
The one standing by the railway saying goodbye
He’s climbing the barbed wire fence and caught at the top
The one whose mind is running and won’t ever stop
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Hello fellow writter i am pleased to read your poem and know that you did a fantastic job... =) you have a great sence of rythm and you are very descriptive good job keep it up...
You have created a lovely image of Paul in this delightful poem...10
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7/28/2025 10:10:20 PM # 1.0.0
Bethany, Paul is fantastic. Are you sure? 10++