Tuesday, May 27, 2008

Patterns Of Herringbone Comments

Rating: 5.0

Step out along those well worn pathways,
through dappled woods, beneath lush trees.
View verdant grass as it gently sways,
wafted by a soft balmy breeze.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 26 March 2009

Another gem Ernestine, you have taken me on a wonderful journey through the countryside. Love, Andrew xx

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Joseph Daly 04 June 2008

‘View verdant grass as it gently sways, ’ this is such a wonderful line. And overall this is a great use of rhyme for what is in essence a pastoral. I won’t say that this is an original approach, it isn’t, and yet it has that freshness to it, and more: it is a beautifully crafted poem. As ever with your work, it is a celebratory poem and it seems that that is the reason for it.

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Duncan Wyllie 28 May 2008

A warm and gentle walk along the highways and byways of your wonderful craft This is so gentle, so peaceful Perfect! ! Thankyou for this Love duncan x

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Lynda Robson 27 May 2008

It is interesting to think of people who have walked the paths we now walk, a lovely title for a great piece of writing, full of imagery as always, thanks, Lynda xxx

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