Monday, September 10, 2018

Patterns: A Sonnet Without Rhyme Comments

Rating: 5.0

How many dawns have failed
to become morning because they
fell back into a darkness
which consumed them?
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Daniel Brick
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Denis Mair 16 September 2018

In such an order of being, conditions for life's flourishing are provided. Despite the fragility and transience of life-moments we sense life's tenacity. To see life enfolded in the womb of being is a doubly beautiful experience: firstly, because a fabric of natural laws was beautifully woven along our way to the present; secondly, because beauty is our guiding star to find our way forward. From the remote past into the future, our extended life walks in beauty.

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Sandra Feldman 11 September 2018

For the sensitive soul, the need for beauty is so great When fulfilled, it surrenders to a special spiritual state. 'An order of being' thru Nature, does guide our lives, so beautifully expressed in this exquisite poem.

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