Patients Of A Lioness Comments
She is stunning and miraculous
The way she moves among the grass
As she stocks the grazing antelopes
Every pound of muscle and strength
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Britney, This poem is very beautiful! It shows that you're more experienced than your age.I hope that you know this Latin's expression: 'carpe diem' and also this one from Ronsard: ' Cueille des aujourd'hui les roses de la vie'; in English: 'Gather as many roses of life starting today'. Your poem reminds us to take life slowly, one day at a time; there is no need to rush. Keep on writing, you're good. H.L.
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9/6/2025 11:31:18 AM # 1.0.0
Very creative theme. I love the sentiment and progression. Thanks for this one, Britney