Patient-Doctor Dialogue Comments

The conversation between the patient and doctor is quite amusingly recorded. It is evident that the patient is greatly under the fear of death!

Very nice rhyming, perfect, in fact, except for the fourth couplet, and quite humorous in places. I enjoyed reading this very much. Thanks for posting!

Fear of death finally ends in mental turbulence anyway...an interesting dialogue-poem between doctor and the patient...10++++

An impatient patient with the volley of questions and a calm doctor trying to find the solution, very craft conversation with a philosophical undertone Rajnish ji, Fantastic, In your Style..10++

poem with an innocence of a nursery rhyme

Your poem illustrates the scope there is for a dialogue-poem. It brings poetry and drama together in some way. A humorous poem also. 'Don't you fly'. Skillful rhyming couplets.

Beautiful dialogues between patient and doctor are penned here. This rhyming poem is much interesting to read and it is much didactic. Thanks.

गुरुजी सादर प्रणाम, Very beautiful conversation between doctor and patient. I liked the last line Give rest to your mind and don't you fly Actually the fact of life is we keep doing different kinds of fantasies in our life and do not relax our mind as well as our beautiful body at all.

A well inked composition. Truly fascinating.........10+++++++

Beautifully written.....thank u, dear poet......anjandev roy.

Ha ha ha, the last line is amusing! A nice poem that rhymes well.

Beautiful dialogue sir. Fruit fish and meat all nutrition out so what to nourish. Thank-you sir.