Though life is a creased cloth,
It can be
Ironed out.
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Patience is the key to success! good thinking Asma. Nice to read this poem!
It is easy to write a long poem full of words. It is very difficult to write one like this and still be able to communicate. Great technique.
'Confounded pickle'...a curious similie! I like it for its candid expression and profound philosophy!
Clever: a neat, concise and polished poem! Good write!
Wise words from a fabulous poet...keep writing Asma! Preets
Yes asma You got that right patience is the key