Thursday, March 6, 2008

Patience Comments

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i tried to go for it
but it was the mistake
but now i try not to rush
yet i think it to is wrong
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Harley Morriss
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Monkey Mendez 01 June 2008

For a title, perhaps 'patience' or 'the right time'? I like it :)

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J Baker 11 May 2008

Very well written. Well done.

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Harley Morriss

Harley Morriss

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