Patience Comments

Ahhhh....the ole' Should i stay or Should i go, now.....I like this a lot, Linda....i'll leave another comment now, & we'll see if anyone wants to criticize this one.... Specifically, i like the structure, almost lyrical, as it is tight & crisp, yet so mellifluously fluid....Rhythm very much in sync w/ Rhyme...Fine crafting Midnight. fjr

Patience is hard to do when you are in love and waiting for the answer from the other half...

What a simply structured and deeply felt poem about trust and loving. So gentle in tone and yet with an underlying strength which is leonine. You are a fine poet, Linda. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxx

Damn I feel spoilt. Not only do I get your fab poem, but Frank's comment gives me a new word for my dictionary! Danny