Thursday, May 29, 2014

Patience Comments

Rating: 4.8

I am your mascara before the lash
The blusher before the blush
The nettle before the rash
I am the vodka before the rush
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Tim Kitchin
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Clarence Prince 07 November 2014

Yes, Wait and see And time will tell! Thanks for sharing, Tim!

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Clarence Prince 07 November 2014

Yes, Wait and see And time will tell! Thanks for sharing, Tim!

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Alesia Leach 28 September 2014

An interesting take on patience. Sad the baby unshaken. Yes very thought provoking. Thank you

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Anand Brown 29 May 2014

Catchy witty poem with a unique rythmic quality to it. Utterly absorbing and thought provoking. One of the best poems i have read in a while. Take a bow :)

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