Sunday, October 5, 2008

Patience Comments

Rating: 5.0

One day I will forget her,
In my head for many a long year,
Just when I have a bright idea,
Of how to get out of here.
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Anthony Dover
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Ony Me 09 December 2008

Great poem......well written.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 08 October 2008

So one mistake can cost the earth, As it turned out, nether alarm, Nor arm can be released, Until her love has been relinquished..............wonderfulepithet of love by the imagery, ingenious write ripples across.......wellpenned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Linda Weischedel 05 October 2008

I totally enjoyed this poem, good job.

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 05 October 2008

NICE FLOW OF WORDS...AS IF WOVEN TOGETHER ON GOLD STRINGS... :)

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