Sunday, August 26, 2018

Pathways Between Desks Comments

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They strode the pathway between the desks
Looking, watching for mistakes
Occasional stops whispered words
In charge of their domain keeping silence
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John A'Hern
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Bri Edwards 13 October 2018

(cont.) Hey, teacher! maybe use lie, not lay, and an apostrophe in the Poet's Notes. ha ha. to MyPoemList bri (a college dropout, but not a life dropout) :) :) p.s. Did you ever hear it said: Those who can, DO; those who can't, TEACH. :)

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John Ahern 14 October 2018

Hi Bri, thank you for your thoughts and comments, learning, learning always learning.

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Bri Edwards 13 October 2018

(cont.) i guess 'universal education' to a certain age/grade is beneficial to society, though it does not benefit all students and may even hold them back from other pursuits more to their liking and fit for their interests, abilities, and futures. it does have some socializing impact, not always good. it DOES provide some relief to parents/guardians while the kids are in school. (cont.)

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John Ahern 14 October 2018

Hi Bri, some of the Teachers in my era live in my thoughts and daily life daydreams. In my instance some knew how to pass on knowledge others not so. I cannot give an answer to your comment of benefiting society, I think I did and have.

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Bri Edwards 13 October 2018

favorite lines: Lost in a world of learning Whirring thoughts keep on turning Why am I here please turn me free? & How did today go? You mutter a reply and head for your island (cont.)

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John Ahern 14 October 2018

Hi Bri, once again I thank you for taking the time to read the poem.

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