Pathway Of Life Comments

“Scarce has become a happy meal“ At times, life is found to be much less than what one bargain for. But we go on in hope. Thanks for the truths presented in your wonderful poem. Enjoyed.

like a shoal...like a mirage in the sea...good use of simile

good one..............

Failures are the stepping stones to success and one can reach the other shore in the end.

Nicely composed poem and wise use of words. Excellent write Raghavan

waiting game is well pictorised Vidya..in love and war waiting is suicidal..same with life also..awake and seek..there are ways open...it requires opening the window to get the sunlight in....nice poem Vidya

A visible strength in your wording allows for different feelings to come to the surface. Use your emotions. Thanks Tracker

Heartfelt poem of one who searches for the good in life. May you find one who shares the path of life with this same passion for the good.