Sunday, September 20, 2009
Paths That Lead Somewhere Comments
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Paths that lead somewhere; do they know where they go?
Do they think of the pebbles and the thorns
That can wound your feet; do they imagine
Or ever ponder that distances are not the reason
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Fay Slimm
20 September 2009
'Paths are just tracks' very true Rani - - - -and so difficult to follow at times - a tender verse....10/10 from Fay.
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8/3/2025 11:02:48 AM # 1.0.0
I'm reposting the comment because the more I read the last verse, the more I am in love with it, and also the repetitions of, 'if you had known..' 'If you had known that paths that lead you somewhere But do not guide you along; sing, sing a lonely song; That paths are just tracks, trails to be followed And life is still to be walked along.' it's all genius here, and the 'sing a lonely song' gives me chills, and 'life is still to be walked along..' is perfectly beautiful. Such simplicity; so lovely and distinctive. Bravo!