Tuesday, November 6, 2012

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Shihabudheen K J
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Susan Lacovara 19 September 2014

All paths lead somewhere..some take us away, only to twist and lead us back to places of the heart. A beautiful expression...almost as if thinking outloud! Sweet and pure words. PEACE

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Kaila George 13 April 2014

Simple but effective and to the point...another interesting format of writing...thanks for sharing.

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Kemi Kemms 18 May 2013

No path taken is wrong; everything happens for a reason!

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Jahan Zeb 05 December 2012

Nice style for a nice message delivered from a nice heart to a nice heart. I loved the the way the opinion is sought in this poem. innocently. I length of each line increasing suggest the warmth and the enthusiasm increased in the heart of the poet. Only those paths leading to you. A nice innocent expression of telling every way and manner adopted is only cuz the poet thinks its leading to his beloved. Romantic and nice Shihabudheen

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Chandra Thiagarajan 20 November 2012

A beautiful poem to your princess.Ponder over and find the right path to meet her. Thanks and best wishes. Chandra Thiagarajan

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 20 November 2012

Do you think anybody knows where YOU went wrong. Think about it.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 November 2012

A lovely brisk poem i enjoyd lots. Good job!

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Karen Sinclair 06 November 2012

Thankfully we sometimes take the wrong route only to find a more profound appreciation and deep breaths through more solid steps when we finally know where on earth we are going...lovely in its joy...tyvm karen

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Neela Nath Das 06 November 2012

Aha! wonderful poem Sihas. Your princess is lucky enough.She must be waiting for you too.10+++

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