Saturday, June 23, 2007

Path You Wish To Take, The. Comments

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Time to dwell and make amends
For all the things I may have thought
But then again it takes two it seems
Can you amend as well?
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Alison Smith
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David Harris 01 July 2007

Alison, as Jim so nicely put it is a very hard decision. I was lucky when I made mine, but I do know of others that weren't. We each have a path to take and only we alone can choose. Very thought provoking poem. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Not a member No 4 23 June 2007

It's a very hard decision, for sometimes only time let's us know. Strong writing Alison, and thought provoking. xx jim

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Orange, New South Wales, Australia
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