Path Through The Pain Comments
The earth changes every minute beneath my feet
From the deep arise mountains that I can’t reach
I feel the swallowing whistle of the hurricane
As the ground opens below tearing down my blame
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poignant and introspective...one can observe very much soul searching inside there...good work Allan...10
compact reflective thought out Allan! beautiful wording! 10+
A piece deep in emotion with comparison of despair and disaster. Interesting.
this is so meaningful poem also well penned well done there luwi
disaster comes in different faces..phenomenon comes any time..
very profound but sad lovely poem surely a tenner from me anjali
Very thick feelings interwoven with vivid images. A great poem
a sad poem...with strong painful images.. beautifully penned
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7/18/2025 3:25:05 PM # 1.0.0
a beautiful write and metaphoric present is very very fine.....